Telling Your Story: Tips for Writing a Powerful College Essay
By Jill Garfunkel
After 25 years of teaching high school English—most of them at Lynbrook High School—I’ve read hundreds of college essays. And I can say with confidence: few writing tasks are as important—or as intimidating—as the college essay.
The Common Application essay is your chance to speak directly to admissions officers—not through your test scores or GPA, but as a real human being with a story to tell. It matters. And yes, they really do read them! One of my students once received a handwritten note from an admissions officer saying her essay was the most honest and heartfelt she had ever read. That kind of impact is possible—when you write from the heart.
Here are a few tips I always share with students preparing their college essays:
1. Write About Personal Growth—It Covers Everything
The Common App provides several prompts, but here’s a secret: if you write about meaningful personal growth, you can address almost any of them. Whether you’re discussing a challenge, an accomplishment, a belief you questioned, or a shift in perspective—it all ties back to how you’ve grown. These stories are powerful because they show reflection, resilience, and readiness for what’s next. Don’t worry about having the most “unique” story; sometimes, the simplest truths speak the loudest.
2. Show, Don’t Just Tell
This classic writing advice is especially relevant here. Don’t just say you’re hardworking or empathetic—tell a story that reveals it. Think of your essay as a chapter from the book of your life. What scene would help a reader understand who you are? Use vivid details, authentic emotion, and even dialogue when appropriate. Let the reader feel like they’re right there with you.
3. Go Beyond the Résumé
Admissions officers already know your grades and activities. Use this essay to share what those things don’t say. Maybe your Saturdays at the animal shelter taught you patience. Maybe you stood up for a friend—and learned something about courage. This is your chance to add depth to your application and let your character shine.
4. Remember: This Is Your Story
Think of your essay as a letter, a snapshot, or a reflection—something only you could write. The strongest essays are deeply personal. They don’t sound like anyone else, and that’s what makes them stand out. Don’t try to write what you think colleges want to hear. Write the truth of your experience, in your voice.
Jill currently teaches AP Language and Composition as well as Academic Intervention Services. She brings deep insight, empathy, and expertise to one of the most important—and often daunting—writing tasks students face.
She says, “I’d love to help you bring your story to life. Feel free to reach out to me at Jillcs77@aol.com. Because yes—your story matters.”
